samedi, mars 17, 2007

Adventures in Literary Flow

I jest.

But I'm not jesting when I say that this New York Times article about Barack Obama is nearly unreadable. I couldn't tell who was living where, whose daddy was involved, whose mommy was involved, and whether or not Barack Obama was actually liked or disliked on his home island of Hawaii.

Get my red pen.


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